I gave you

I gave you my affection

And you let the flames of my love reflect in those wonderful deep eyes.

I gave you my heart

And you made a little origami crane with it,

letting it fly away into the dangerous waters of passion

it would’ve been lovely, except you watched it sink and now I feel nothing but pain.

I gave you my promise

And you gave me yours,

expect my promises mean everything and yours

yours mean nothing.

I gave you my belief

And you returned it with doubt,

You let my belief die with my heart.

And I’ve finally got it through my head,

I finally understand that,

You’ll never return anything that I,



And spare.

Because I gave you my soul

And you gave me an empty house with a thick layer of dust.


6 Comments Add yours

  1. RubySky says:

    So I walked away from that skeleton house
    I scattered your lying words on the wind
    I will never hear them again
    And that’s fine
    A farewell that was too long put off
    And a broken heart
    But I will rebuild
    (Your style of poetry is so captivating I just had to try my hand at a little snippet of it. πŸ™‚ )

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    1. Laurel says:

      Dude. I’m forever impressed with your comments. Can everyone comment like this?? That would be lit. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ™πŸ½πŸ™πŸ½

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      1. RubySky says:

        Aw thanks ^-^

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Laurel says:

        Stick around man! We should run a poetry blog together or something haha. ❀️

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  2. This is so gorgeous and SAD. *sniffs* Punches me right in the feels…And I love that paper crane bit! Really neat! ^_^

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    1. Laurel says:

      Awww thank you!!

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