I gave you my affection
And you let the flames of my love reflect in those wonderful deep eyes.
I gave you my heart
And you made a little origami crane with it,
letting it fly away into the dangerous waters of passion
it would’ve been lovely, except you watched it sink and now I feel nothing but pain.
I gave you my promise
And you gave me yours,
expect my promises mean everything and yours
yours mean nothing.
I gave you my belief
And you returned it with doubt,
You let my belief die with my heart.
And I’ve finally got it through my head,
I finally understand that,
You’ll never return anything that I,
Give,
Sacrifice,
And spare.
Because I gave you my soul
And you gave me an empty house with a thick layer of dust.
So I walked away from that skeleton house
I scattered your lying words on the wind
I will never hear them again
And that’s fine
By
Me
A farewell that was too long put off
And a broken heart
But I will rebuild
(Your style of poetry is so captivating I just had to try my hand at a little snippet of it. π )
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Dude. I’m forever impressed with your comments. Can everyone comment like this?? That would be lit. ππππ½ππ½
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Aw thanks ^-^
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Stick around man! We should run a poetry blog together or something haha. β€οΈ
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This is so gorgeous and SAD. *sniffs* Punches me right in the feels…And I love that paper crane bit! Really neat! ^_^
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Awww thank you!!
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