Small then Big

Everything is too small

Until it gets too big

I feel like I’m stuck in a loop

A loop where I go from

feeling so small and trapped and then

so big and overwhelming

either way.

it’s too loud

and too silent

too bright

and too dark

not worth it

worth too much

and an exhausting loop of confusion.

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8 Comments Add yours

  1. RubySky says:

    This is gorgeous and raw O-O

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    1. Laurel says:

      Okay I don’t think you know how much your comments mean to me haha. Every time I post on here I’m not sure if you guys will like it and every time you comment something positive and it makes me really happy so thank you for that. šŸ’–āœØšŸ’›

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      1. RubySky says:

        ^-^ Aw, I’m so glad I could make you happy. I always love seeing a post from you, you have a very poetic writing voice and an intriguing way of seeing the world. ā¤ Keep on keeping on, friend.

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      2. Laurel says:

        I’m glad you like it. šŸ’› I will. And you too.

        Liked by 1 person

  2. writeowl says:

    I love how raw this is and yet how smoothly it flows ā¤ļø

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Laurel says:

      Awww I’m glad. šŸ’›āœØ I really appreciate your guys comments. šŸ˜©šŸ˜©

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Your poetry gives me chills. No joke. <333

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Laurel says:

      I’m glad someone enjoys it besides my mom lol. šŸ˜‚šŸ’–

      Liked by 1 person

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